Episode 5, "So much good fortune", An early assessment…

Yes, it was a very short chapter. Mostly because I eliminated a lengthy flashback sequence about how and why Nighttrain decided to come home. Why cut it? Because flashback is why. I want to keep things moving forward. Flashbacks, at best, are good for creating contemplative spaces within a story. Now is not the time for contemplation in this story.

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